thanking you's! i appreciate the feedback.
i don't think i've posted this before but it's something i wrote a while back and never really did anything with, if you're interested in poetry and shit.
also why does the word 'poetry' make me feel like a big girls blouse? ain't doin' nothin' for my street cred.
anyway have at it
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Monster
Once imprisoned, forever alone
On this accursed plane
Once a roaming menace
Now a recognised bane
I sit, and wait, and fester
It's all that I can do
I think of things I could have done
I think of me and you
Why did you desert me so?
What was it I had done?
I did what we agreed to do
But in the end you won
You won and left me rotting here
Seething over past
How dare you double cross me
Your victory will not last
For I will return to your world
Break free of this glass cage
Rape your world of life and mercy
In a future age
Once through with your pathetic world
I'll desecrate the dead
Rejoice I will upon your sight
Your dead eyes filled with dread
Until that time, do not forget
Our deal that you did break
Never knowing when I'll come
You'll pray for your own sake
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