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04-12-2013, 11:56 AM
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Oddworld 7-3W


"you need to rotate the title by 180° ....this is how you read it ...it is the beginning of a tattoo."



Chapter 1
7-3W



As Mel opened his eyes he found himself tied loosely on an operating table. His only company was the strong scent of cleaning agent in his nose and a seven legged tiny insect, sitting in the upper right corner of the room.
Mel’s eyes rested on the insect for a while before he lifted his head up and looked around calmly.
This was not one of those operating rooms and it was not one of the laboratories either… It was an empty room with a grey-white ceiling and grey concrete walls. And except for Mel, the operating table, a bright neon lamp and the insect [which was probably not moving because it was dead] -there wasn’t anything inside the room.
“I feel I need to take my medicine.” Mel said to himself emotionless and sank his head down on the table once more, his eyes halfway closed. He felt anxious.
Mel had no idea how he ended up here. He also didn’t know why he had to take his medicine. But if he didn’t take it, they would get very angry again and punish him, like they always do. Mel shuddered trying to suppress that uncomfortable thought.
He laid there for a while staring on a different spot at the ceiling.
It was hard to tell what he was thinking, since his face was all blank and his white eyes, white feather and white skin didn’t reveal any kind of emotions. Instead his pale tall and lanky appearance seemed to be a reflection of the empty room in which he was currently trapped –only in a slightly brighter version.
Solely the dark circles around his eyes seemed to reveal a certain tiredness.

Suddenly he started moving again. He squirmed free from his ties in a few seconds without difficulties.
He jumped to his feet abruptly. From the corner of his eye he noticed the insect flinching in surprise. “Oh you are still alive?” He carefully took it and then hopped from the chunky operating table.
“Don’t bite, or I’ll bite you back.” He said with a calm voice facing the door.

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I'll upload more if I get at least 1 reply


the chapter is actually longer

but I split it into sub-chapters...

this is older it's older than the captured ones... like a prototype for it and the capturers.... i found it in my files recently and really liked it ...and i think i never uploaded it? so i thought why shouldn't i upload it? unfortunately if forgot the plot and.. maybe someone can help me with the story a bit?
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