The cables by which the catwalk hung started breaking - all but one of them?
I liked the chapter, though I'm still struggling with the plot a little as I've not yet made time to reread this all (sorry). This seemed quite dream-like, which is ok as it's a flashback. The dialogue was good, and the action was cool, too. I'm not certain as to
why the catwalk broke but perhaps that's meant to be a mystery.
Or perhaps I need to reread the story.
