This is my first attempt at a fan-fic, it is probably gonna be crap but I don't know till I try.......
Here goes nothing...........*takes a deep breath*
Chapter 1:
The Gabbit glazed dreamily into the distance and he pondered.
He hopped towards the river and glanced at his reflection.
He reached towards it, thinking it was another Gabbit. He splashed it out the way and sighed deeply.
The gabbit's named was Chomp. He didn't exactly have a home, he just drifted helplessly around Oddworld hoping to find his kind and stayed in randomly selected places. He was lonely, empty.......He felt something was missing.
He pondered into a deep thought,not knowing what was round the corner.His life would change any moment.Chomp glared at the building, it looked like some new
factory,after Rapture Farms and Soulstorm Brewey what was next????
Chomp glared couriously at the Slig hammering a sign up.
The Slig hammered away, and put his thumbs up.
"Done it Boss! What now???"
Chomp froze when he saw the sign, "COMING SOON:Revaltion's Fridge: Mmm mmm new products glaore!! Introducing
GABBIAR!
Chomp gasped at that part, but he suddenly had a thought: "If they are gabbiars still left in the world, then there is Gabbits!!"
Chomp grinned. If the Gabbits were in GREAT danger then it up to Chomp to save them all.
His quest had began........................
That was pretty crap, but tell me what you think...
More coming soon........
