Shame on you WK, you also forgot mine! *slaps him*
To Gabbit...very short poem...the rhymes seem not logical to me because : Why does a Slig needs a wig? And does he needs a pig for something, does the Sligwants to eat it, or is it the pet of him?
When you start to make a poem, don't think of quick rhymes, you also have to respect the poetical logic in every row.
My tip : Try it again ^^
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