Beautiful.
Although it's super-impressive for pre-alpha, I think it's fair to offer our thoughts now since it's easier to take them on board at this stage (if they're worth taking on board at all) than when it's more developed and harder to change.
I will say that both screens so far are a bit lacking in... I dunno, visual flare? The colourful signs and scrolling screens in the old games were really engaging both visually and because of the messages they gave. Maybe you don't want them breaking the 4th wall any more, but you could still add signs and screens that had adverts, workplace messages and symbols (electricity) near levers etc.
It's great work though, "pre-fucking-alpha!"
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