Yes, the comma denotes a dramatic pause. It's a perfectly valid use for it. Also, I don't claim to be a writer. I am a writer. It's what I am paid to do and it's my favourite past time. Now, would you like to make a few more personal quips over something I said which was not supposed to be offensive or particularly aggressive, or do you have a few more to go?
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Oh yeah, fair point. Maybe he was just tortured until he lost consciousness.
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