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03-16-2002, 12:44 PM
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Oddworld My new story Oddworld Congquest of The Lost Continent

Well since I finnished Blargs Oddyssey I have a bran new story on the mind. It is called Oddworld Congquest of The Lost Continent. Here is a sneak preview of my story. I still have to write my first chapter but that will be soon. Good chance my first chapter will be written in a day or two. So have a look at my preview and tell me what I can do for ideas.

How would you like if you were two Mudokin fisherman cought in a big storm at sea? And then the storm destroys your boat and leaves you a float in the middle of the sea. No land for miles and preditors every where. But then you find land and you swim to it. But this land is no ordinary place. Thousands of miles awey from Mudos. Lost and nobody around to help you. But then you meet a new breed of Mudokin that don't take kindly to strangers. Well then meet Kluna and his friend Zin. They are lost on a unusial continent that they never even herd of. What makes things worse is the inhabitants. For are friends have drifted half way across Oddworld to discover that they just drifted onto a dreaded continent. Will Kluna and Zin ever find there way back to Mudos? Will they survive journey? Time will only tell. Oddworld: Congquest of The Lost Continent. Being lost is only half the adventure!

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