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03-13-2002, 08:13 PM
Gabbit
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Idea mr.valet slig oddysse

Making my own fiction book: Along time ago, in OddWorld there was a place called Rupture Farms the biggest company on OddWorld. The main bad guys were the Glukkons they want nothin but cash$$$. Alot of bad sligs were hiting mudokons and alot were dying. But one slig his name was slig Valet. He was a bad guy but now he did not belive in being bad will get you money. So thats when it began.



CHAPTER ONE TRAPPED IN VENGANCE.

So there was slig valet he saw a mudokon near the working bay and said hey you here.YES!!!!!!!!.Then slig valet said shhhhhhhhhhh....get over here. He told him we must escape frome Rupture Farms. He said that would be great but how. Get more mudodkons to help us. Good idea(doh). Anyways whats your name said slig valet. My name is Xavier. Nice to meet you said Slig Valet. Ok we got to go. The poop chute is very far away and in the hall way are 2 BigBroSligs said Xavier. Ok lets take the other hall then ok?Sure but lets make it quick ok lets go. Frezzzzzz im a Glukkon chump why ARE YOU NOT AT WORK YOU BASTERDS. So then they ran for miles and miles finally they out runned him. You ok Xavier? Yes im ok the poop chute is right there wait dough there are 15 interns in there are you crazy. I have a good idea pretend im hiting you down there but i will have to hurt you hard to make it realistic ok? Oh man ok ill do it said Xavier. So they went down. WE MADE IT CRIED VALET. OK KNOW LETS WAIT FOR IT TO OPEN. was that a good chapter my next one will be more interesting.

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