That's really, really coming together nicely - It's nice to see progress as more details are added. But I'm afraid I don't have any criticism for you. All I can keep doing is throwing rep at you and telling you how awesome it looks.
BTW, don't take Havoc seriously.
As for applying at JAW, I was going to say last night that most of the artist jobs are gone from their
recruitment page (which is actually a good thing since it's cool they've found people). However, they are aware of you as I said much earlier - You really should contact them anyway, and find our what your options are.
Of course I won't push you any further if it's something you aren't keen on doing. I just find it a shame that you're not working for them with the talent you have.