[moxco]

It is a very deep and touching story. I almost shed a tear upon reading reading Bob's hopes for mudokons; these thoughts of defiance, in the face of an oppressive Orwellian regime, you have expressed with such vigorous determination. This unique idea of an industrialist sympathizing with a mudokon is hitherto unheard of to me. With Bob's alienation from his peers you appear to be emulating themes of isolation witnessed most commonly in French New Waves films such as Le Mépris and Les Quatre Cents Coups. Or perhaps Bob's ambitions to assist the underclass bear influence from the works of Charles Dickens such as A Christmas Carol and Great Expectations. Labelling this captivating piece of literature, I have not yet done so clearly, however no adjective short of magnificent I would dare deem appropriate.