Well I'll give you 7/10.
I liked the poem and the others were a little harsh about it.
It was very good for a first try.
Though some of the verse didn't make sense, so what I liked it overall.
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Originally posted by ODDBODD
thats was pa-pa-pa-pathetic!! i wouldnt print it and wipe my ass with such nonsense!!
LOL nah kids man, 2/10
tooo long and not enough humor
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Not enough humor.........?You're wrong it was humorous!!!!!!!
It was not pa-pa-pa-pathetic!!!!
Too long? I could think of other poems longer than that thank you.