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Trully awesome. JAW should be ashamed to not have you with 'em.
If you want some constructive criticizm though, If I was you, I would de-blur/de-DOF that "web" hanging on the scene's left side (a bit or comepletely). Also, in the original screenshot there are much more... string thingies... coming out of the holes in the rocks....
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Thats good criticism Varrok, You did notice something I'd work on with more time, ...more string!
as for the DoF with the Web and BG, it seems like the web in the original was slightly blur'd so this was to follow that but also cut down on background clutter to the scene to keep the focal point on the foreground. but it was defiantly something i played around with till i got what I felt was a good fit.
also you should see the whole thing when I pan the camera up to the next screens. Its so much nicer in motion :O