I really should finally say something about this since I'm reading it as you post - I do have a little criticism (I sort of agree with Oddey about some panels being a little cluttered, though inking them obviously makes them a lot clearer, while maybe I also feel the transition between some scenes ought to be lengthened a little), but since it's a WIP and that you've put a lot of work into it, it doesn't really seem fair of me to do so.
I will say though that I do love the unusual setting and impressive character design, all of them seem to be deep and well-thought out, especially your protagonist, Kei. There needs to be more characters like her. :P
But yes, keep going with this, I'm enjoying watching it slowly come together and gather momentum.
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