Just generally what is going on in a lot of the scenes. The ones that involve large amounts of talking. Mostly because the order in which they talk seems pivotal to understanding it. It can be a little tricky to distinguish characters in my opinion, but that's probably just me. There's a bit where Kei seems to accuse the elder of something, but I have no clue what it is about. Perhaps because I have not been paying proper attention. I enjoy reading these though.
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Congratulations, Oddey, on winning FC's fanfiction competition two years running! You are clearly the man to beat!
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