@Splat:
thank you! ^___^
...then you can also play all the new OW remakes and Slig Storm and Hand of Odd... ^^ there are rumors that they will even make a HD remake of AE and that they will complete the OW quintology finally but everyone probably knows that already xD ... still it's cool *.*
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You've complained about me over-analysing my own writing before, but in part one... There was an atmosphere of... well, sligs in the wild, industrials out of industrialism... brotherhood and survival... something I wish I'd spent more time working to capture when I was writing part one, but there are so few really significant moments for Stivik in that time, apart from Stack's death and Tilic's betrayal, which was why only they got written in any detail. It's why I grabbed the opportunity to mention one of his jobs later on when he was watching over Dionysia. I wish he was open enough to discuss them more with her, so we could have heard of more  But then he wouldn't be who he is. |
lol xD ...everyone is over-analysing his own art constantly, too much certainly isn't good.
but the right amount makes us improve ....
you're right about the atmosphere in part one... it was and still is very inspiring, if it wouldn't be for that first part of TD i guess i would've never become such a huge fan of Sligs xD
(-the only game i had already played at that time was SW, and i didn't know much about the other games
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it might not be as well written as the latest chapters but despite everything i like them the most ^__^
weird question: if Stivik has a really bad day and Dion is in a temporary coma and it's his fault ... would he start to talk to her / or blame her while she sleeps or isn't he that kind of character? -Stivik is not easy to see through while it has been always very easy to see through Dion xD ...this btw, is no critique, it's fascinating
i would give them a week or even a little more... a week seems long but it seems short aswell depending on what happens... a single day is too short xD
btw: ...I'm sure Arnie has more than enough sectrets that could ruin his reputation if they end up in the wrong persons hands - things that could make him go to prison...
you could create a situation in which Arnie Dion and Stivik are in a pinch, because each has hold of secret informations about the other 2, and if they do a wrong move the other one will sell them out,
maybe someone else comes to rupture farms and the situation gets even worse because noone knows on which side that one is... never mind i watched too much Code Geass and Death Note xD xD
btw: the time of the story and the time in which you read it can be very different... moments can be stretched out endlessly... or be very short.. what is it called in english? I can't find it anywhere xD )
...ha I've been the same with my art since... a year? xD I know i could do it better if i were in the mood for it, and i don't get anything done, but as you said it's the best to just erase what you don't like and start anew instead of trying to change it partly... hehe I'm looking forward to read again
...Gappiqu ...makes me want to go and read through the old w@rf xD
you're very welcome
I'm glad you like it even if it's just the sketch ^_^
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@AIN:
thanks AIN ! I'm glad you like my art