Thank you all for taking the time to read it and leave feedback! I will admit that the name of the species is
VERY unoriginal and that their design isn't as oddworldish as it could be (and my avatar is what the main character Aro is suppose to look like). ^^; Unfortunately, my style is more anime-ish and for some reason everything seems to turn out more cute than ugly and strange and terrifying =/ As far as grammar, I will work on that. I tend not to trust spell check as much as I probably should. I do hope that you will continue to read on (if you wish)!
And I will take your recommendation and check that fanfiction out!
