Once more you amaze us all with your talent, Lampi... That was just amazing... I don't write much about the Native lands, because I don't think I would be able to cope with writing about that much everyday magic, but you seem to have it all totally under control... I wish I could write like you, just like I wish I could draw like you... Next you'll be saying you can sing, dance, and play hundreds of instruments as well...
But enough of the envy. One thing I would like to request, if I may, is the use of quotation marks, as I found it slightly hard to notice when speech ended in the chapter...
That apart, it was better than perfect!
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Guns don't kill people, People kill people! Using Guns.
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