I actually enjoyed UO. But I think one of the problems was that it had so many subplots it was hard to keep track. Yes I agree with the characters too...with so many by the time you get back to one of them you are like 'who is this again?' Though I didn't really get that feel with UO, (though it may have been due to the long lengths of time between chaps), with some books I read, 'subplot hop'. In other words the book would suddenly switch to another subplot, leaving your mind literally spining. Ugh...
Other then that...it was well written and would like to see it finished. But you are the writer...and it is ultimently your decsion as to whether to finish it or not.
*sees Dan fainted on the floor* um...Dan....
Spider: I think its because you actually critised some bits for once....
Oh....
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