I think you need to do some research on existing codices first. Look at the D&D, Warhammer and LoTR codices, while being based around tabletop warfare, they also give a lot of insight into vastly detailed worlds. Since designing my own P&P I've downloaded the C'thulu mythos rulebook, old D&D codices and dusted down my old necrons book as well.
I think I'm going down the path of the nerd, haha.
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Oh yeah, fair point. Maybe he was just tortured until he lost consciousness.
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