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04-24-2011, 06:35 PM
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The only real problem I have with the arms is the right arm that's being bent at the elbow. The line you've drawn to indicate a crease in the jacket/bending of the arm drops down too far. If you erase the bottom 1/4 of that line so it's not connecting to the line that makes up the outer arm, it'll look a lot better.
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