Hm... To be sure, it is a nice story.
Nitpickity points do exist however. My main being that Reg and Sallan are mudokons. One would presume mudokons do not own watches. But that is probably my only real complaint. Otherwise, I find that it is a refreshingly un-epic tale.
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Congratulations, Oddey, on winning FC's fanfiction competition two years running! You are clearly the man to beat!
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