I couldn't comment, mostly because I don't like shading with a pencil since it doesn't show on a scanner, ergo, I don't think the scanner has probably done your piece justice but from what I can tell its good. However, your shading doesn't really take into account one single light source, for example, if it was coming from NNE, the bit under the beak would be a lot darker than the rest of the face for obvious reason.
Anyway keep at it, you seem to have some promise,
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Oh yeah, fair point. Maybe he was just tortured until he lost consciousness.
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