Hi, Oddsville. I just finished reading this fic, and I think it's very good. I kept interested in the plot during the whole 5 chapters so far.
An important observation: the story is told by the point of view of Drix, which a someone who had slaves and lived in his own house, so I suppose he has some money. But, what kind of creature is Drix? And Pompo? You hasn't made it clear through the whole story. Was that intentional? the incident with the cave paintings made me think of him as a mudokon, but who knows? His thoughts of Abe sounded as if Abe was a different species from him.
Anyway, next chapter, please?
