I love making animations, but sadly, most of them are shitty too
I'm sure if you keep trying, it will be better. My constructive criticism is:
Perhaps add voices to the animation instead of having to read it.
Having it a bit less fast-paced so we can understand the story line better.
Having kind of, close-ups to the characters, it will be easier to get the concept.
I also know you'd fix the colour but that is another thing that needs fixing, but if you do that and all the above, it would be great.
Keep trying
