First off, don't double post, people will be reluctant to post if you rush them after just three hours.
If you want my honest opinion, it did look a bit rushed, I understand it was only a preview but the characters don't mix with the white platforms and scenery. Of course, I can't pick out character development or story line but I like the idea of a slig in a free-fire-zone story line. I do want to see this develop, good luck.
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Oh yeah, fair point. Maybe he was just tortured until he lost consciousness.
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