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Sorry for the big wait (my Internet ran out)
I love the positive feedback
Oh and by the way ameba2k I don’t know about the first Idea but I love the second one I reckon it would put a big twist to the story
P.S I just remembered that sligs have mechanical legs but ignore that

Chapter 1 – My Names Zed

Part 2
Crash!!!
DAMNIT!!!
Blood was pouring through my arms and legs flying everywhere
What was going to happen to me was I going to die with me only knowing the secret
And then I looked down and I saw it
My only chance of survival
I braced myself for impact then…
CLUNK!!!
I grabbed onto the top of an anti chant droid and it wasn’t happy about it
It started shaking madly, moving around, trying to shake me off
Which was hard for me because I had short and stubby arms
I started slipping down the side of the droid
‘SHIT!!!’
I grabbed my knife and thrusted it in the side of the droid
And hung off it
It started flying lower so I saw my chance
I pulled my knife out of the droid and started falling
Just as I was a bit from the ground I dug my knife into a nearby wall and it made a screeching sound as I went down
I touched the ground and took my knife out
I instantly fell to the ground covered in blood
My vision started going blurry
I was going to die
And then I saw a big bro coming towards me
‘state your name’
I heard in a low voice
‘Zed’ I mumbled
I heard the big bro turn a built in intercom on
‘sir I’ve found Zed should I shoot to kill’
then I heard Arnie’s voice…
‘Do it’…
BANG!!!
Blood went flying everywhere
I was covered in it
But then I realised
I didn’t get shot
The lifeless body of the big bro fell on me
I looked at it wondering how this could of happened
And then looked at where it came from
A slig with a sniper rifle nodded towards me
And a slig with a scar running down his eye and a modukon came rushing towards me the modukon came up to me
‘what’s you’re name’
I tried to tell them but I couldn’t I was bleeding to fast and I was almost dead
‘I’ll have to repair his wounds’
he pulled a bandage out of a pocket in his loincloth and started wrapping it around my wounds
I saw the slig with the scar pick up the big bro’s intercom
‘Hey can I get a double order of paramite pizza’s please’ he said
‘don’t be an Asshole Z’ I heard Arnie say
‘Whatever they are paying you to save this guy ill pay triple’
‘all you have to do is shoot him right now’
He looked right at me
‘No-ones paying me’
…
‘I see’ said Arnie
‘by the way we know and before those eight days, we will kill you before then’
‘I would like to see you try’
click
Arnie turned of the intercom
‘FUCK YOU!!!’ Z shouted
‘Stitchlips are you done treating him’
‘yeah should we go back to base’
‘yeah I’ll go get snake-eyes’
the modukon looked at me
‘you’re safe now just rest’
…

so what do you think???
(am I spelling modukon right???)