Thanks guys; I'm really relieved that you're still liking this. Thanks especially Sci, those comments are really, really helpful and I'll definitely look at emphasising the peril Rupture Farms is in!
More foreshadowing is to come! Dionysia will be walking a thin line soon, and of course there's still Anni's little problem lurking in the background; Nova will not let herself be forgotten again! (Giving too much away!
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By keeping this other story out of public access I mean not distributing it for free on the internet where everyone with a computer could potentially see it. It's a shame really, 'cus I'd love to get feedback on it from you guys. And I think Sci, you'd produce some brilliant fanart if you liked it
But I guess it'll have to wait until I manage to publish it (if I ever do). It's too short to publish alone but I might write a sequel for it and try and publish both together.
The story is finished now and in many ways it's been a great warm up. Like when you don't exercise for a long time your muscles tighten up. I stopped writing for a while after this story went on hiatus and writing something that's come (relatively) easily has got the words flowing again; I did a little writing last night that poured out me like liquid gold, so hopefully I'll soon be able to turn that flood towards 'The Despicable'. There are some great moments ahead that I'm looking forward to writing (and showing off
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I really need to post in W@RF...
EDIT: just posted in W@RF, and Anni and Dion have just left the RPG for good
. Sci, I think you put me in a foreshadowy mood or something...