I-I feel REALLY bad saying this crashpunk... But for me, Im just not getting that oddworld feel from it.. Something about it makes it seem like it is simply another Tf2 map. I like how you put the barrels and pictures and everything, But I think the only way you will be able to get me to think it was truely odd would probably have to be... Try basing it off of real game scenes, like putting the Huge Deep rooms, Or even The outside of it!
Remember this?
http://vezg.com/browse.php?u=Oi8vd3d...9uZTEucG5n&b=5