Good but just a bit of help for you, when writing, it is more understandable if you press enter when conversation is happening ie:
Bob looked at the slig and cried "What have you done?"
"I say, I seemed to have killed that fuzzle," the slig grated in reply.
"Well that was bloody cold blooded of you," Bob shouted.
and so on and so forth
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Oh yeah, fair point. Maybe he was just tortured until he lost consciousness.
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