whoa cool! *___* but if you keep the novel out of public access noone can buy and read it
and perhaps you need to read some OW fanfictions of other people to get inspired... or as you said working on something else, so good luck with your novel ^^
i like the last few chapters, it's probably a little early to say something about that part of the story in my opinion,
but you could have emphasized the fact that rupture farms/Arnie is in trouble more...
up till now the plot always had some kind of hidden threat ...some epic foreshadowing... but without letting us know what really will happen,
that increased the suspense, but right now we have Anni left, Stivik is gone and the cartel knows about Dionysias secret,
and the threat that arnie might get into trouble and rupture farms might be closed is there too... but it seems too distant, maybe a little too unclear yet.
You finally brought all the characters together but the confrontation seemed to have no effect on the situation as a whole.
but as i said before: it's too early to say something yet, because we have no idea whats going to happen in the next chapter, we don't know what you planned... thats why there is still a lot of suspense left... 8D
so even though the story is on hiatus I'm looking forward to the next chapter
EDIT: oh yeah and Mudomo is right ^^ i think so too!