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08-15-2010, 03:31 AM
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ooc: Mr Spandexpants, I love the fact that you put effort into your spelling and grammar, which is a million times more effort than we get from some other new players. But you're doing some things wrong.

1. There are no random characters in this RPG, with the exception of animals. There are no sligs, glukkons, mudokons or anything else in Rupture Farms except the ones made by the players. Yes, the factory has a very small staff, but it's a small factory sice most of it was shut down, so there you have it.

2. Your character cannot have been living in the factory before now; someone would probably have noticed him wondering around! Your first IC post should have your character arriving at the factory; most industrial characters come in by train.

3. One of the RPG rules is to avoid excessive violence. The point of the RPG is to interact with other characters and develop and plot through that, not to enter all cannons blazing destroying anything in your way. As I've said before, if your character would rather blow up a door than open it, you need to give them a serious rethink.

I see you as having potential as a good RPGer; just try and lessen the violence and remember you're here to play with other RPGers.
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