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Chapter 5 changes
Abe woke hanging from a rope by his wrists he look around he saw a saw on the table be side was half a fuzzle carcass and two interns with needles.He heard a bang Munch hoped in, at first he was alone but a moment later a dozen fuzzles came in with a look of savage anger in there eyes.The interns showed no signs of fear until the fuzzles jumped on the and ripped them to sheds in seconds the fuzzles freed Abe.When Munch and Abe reached the door 3 armored interns with guns jumped in.They ran (and hopped)out.A bullet shaved off Abe ''oooowww!'' cried Abe.
Yarrick cried onto his shoulder he thought there was no point on even thinking on escape.Abe came through the door with a key the cage rumbled and broke Yarrick fell with a thud and got up and followed Abe through a eerie and gloomy factory.Munch and his fuzzles were at the back,Yarrick in the middle and Abe at the front.They found a slig that was Grey it didn't fire at them it said ''Hi'' the fuzzles jumped at it ''Please don't!'' he squealed ''Let me come with you,'' he asked ''OK,'' Abe said.They went on into the gloomy and sad factory.