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Oddworld Meat Grinder's and Mudokons.

Hehe I'm making another Fan fiction! Well here it goes.

Chapter one: Enter Veil

During the raging years of the Rupture farms factory and the Abe incident,
Abe was not the only Mudokon fighting for freedom. Their were other Mudokons working for freedom in the bloody factory. One of those Mudokons was Veil. He was working cleaning up a blood spill near the meat grinders. His buddy Fye was walking towards him. "Hey Veil!" He said happiness in his voice as he walked towards his friend. "Hey!" Veil said standing up. He noticed a Slig look at them then walk into a elevator. That's strange. Veil thought to himself. But right as Fye was walking under the turned off meat grinder, Veil heard something. It was..Slig laughing. He looked and saw the Slig wave at him. The Slig then proceeded to pull a lever which made Rotors on the meat grinder move. and Veil turn to his friend who was unaware of what was happening. "FYE RUN!" But as if the moment his last breathe faded the Meat grinder came down and struck his best friend. A slight scream echoed throughout the factory for a second. Fye's blood was splatted over Veil's face. Veil was shocked. He sat there watching his friend lay motionless as the meat grinder went up and down up and down, Slowly tearing his friends corpse even more with each drop. The Grinder stopped. A Slig walked over to Veil and walked over Fye's dead corpse. The Slig Hit the Mudokon with a stick, which knocked him over. "Get back to work or thata be you." The Slig said as he exhaled the cigarette he was smoking right into Veil's face. The Slig walked away. And Veil sat there in silence.
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