(you got some damn good writing!)
Slick was on yet another "quest for adventure" as the raisin would call it. he hed been walking through the forest for many days and nights, it had been the same monotonous thing over and over, untill this day. He heard a thud and a strange noise about 20 yards ahead of him. he began to get that feeling that every slig gets now and then, he wanted a hunt. his pants would make to much noise if he walked, and he had to make his move now. he leaped forward and raised his gun in a split second; three huge balls of plasma went straight toward the creature he couldn't see untill now. it was a strange red creature that he had never seen before. It's reflexes were like none other, it was faster than anything he had seen. it leaped out of the way and began to rush at him. Slick ducked and the creature tore a gash in his arm,then ran into the brush completely unscathed. Slick thought it might start to stalk him, so he began to head for the nearby town.
(you guys turn, i need to know more about the town before i write about it)
and no, you can't kill him malice; but i got a new friend who's joining, he's called "Evil Slog", if i can convince him to play, he'll push his luck with malice, have fun with him.
also, i just read the last 1 written by teal, tell me if u want me 2 change mine our if your gonna change yours
[ October 04, 2001: Message edited by: SlogMaster ]