hey both chapters were absolutely amazing!!! 8D
it is very well written!!!
still i feel sorry for poor anni ; __ ; when i read this i almost started feeling sick myself xD
Dek was really...uh ..vykkerish xD you also described Arni very well, it was really good ^^
I also liked how Stivik reacted when he read the letter and later when Razor was with him... he dionysia and anni are all victims of a world that has no room for any them ..they all don't really fit in, but stivik is not an experiment like the others, he only experienced another -a real world behind the dead walls of industry which other Sligs perhaps can't even really imagine...
i think if OWI had made some Sligs in the games who do not behave like the stereotypical Sligs it would have made the image of Sligs a lot more believable, they somehow only showed one side of the coin :/
...always when i read TD i start imagining this as some kind of graphic novel
oh and the ending of the last chapter -when Stivik started yelling was really funny :'D
