haha, nahh, your story is the best story i've ever read, when i saw the word EPILOGUE, i was like, NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!
anyway, six, or five? yeah i think its five, you know what? let me check...
yeah its four.
FOUR
Abe and Rein had been travelling to the mudokon villages, and they had been travelling for a long time. For the first time in his life, Abe the Mudokon... was bored, he couldnt even walk, he just had to sit there, in his wheelchair, and be pushed by his friend.
So every four or five miniutes, abe would pull his gun out of his pocket and aim it at rein.
"you know, kid, thats getting kind of annoying."
"yeah? so are you." Abe joked, as he put the weapon away.
all of a sudden, the rocks on the floor started trembling.
"ehhh, just tremors,"
"oh yeah? well you do you explain that?" Abe pointed to the sky, which had black clouds filling it up rapidliy, and before the two knew it, it was pitch black, and the tremors were getting heavier. Then they simply, stopped. Abe and Rein looked around, they could only just see each other, then shadows on the floor started to move, as if they were walking... closing in on Abe.
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sorry i know that was a really short chapter, but i thought that was a pretty good cliffhanger.
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