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second oddworld fanfic, hopefully i'll get this one finished, anyway heres chapter 1.
ONE
It was dark... so dark, that the only things visible were the red glow of slig visors. It was dark, but it was not quiet. Everywhere, the screams of mudokons and the whirring of pants could be heard but not seen. This was what scared Abe, he could'nt see what was around him, only hear it, and sometimes, even feel it. This was his greatest trial yet... Velaunt Werkz. Abe knew it was only a power cut in the small section where he was, but that was what he feared.

Yes, the shadows were his friend, but only shadows, not darkness. Abe could'nt see very well in the dark, plus he was getting old, he was 18 (bear in mind muds only live form40 years.), he had'nt seen munch or alf in 2 years, all the while he'd been blowing up stuff, like blood.co, Zapp'a'dokon, and Gasz Werkz. But nothing compared to this. Velaunt Werkz was huge, it had 500 slaves and a mini Soulstorm Brewery. Abe had already taken care of the brewery, gut there were 2 slaves left, and Abe was already near the self destruct system, but he didnt know the code. All together there were 1000 slaves, but the other 500 were half dead, if they moved a muscle or were touched they'ed break apart, thier blood was being taken out of thier bodies and sprayed on furniture.

Thats what Velaunt Werkz was, a furniture making factory, but it did'nt use wood no, it used wildlife, mashed them up and turned them into chairs and tables. Abe had witnessed this while running from a scrab in a VW workshop. he had been at this job for a week now, but he knew he was close, those slaves could'nt be far and neither could the self destruct system. Just as Abe was thinking about this, the lights flickered on and all the sligs turned round and noticed him. Shocked, the only word Abe could mumble was; "Crap!"