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Oddworld Short Stories II

Last year, I made a short stories thread that received a ton of positive feedback, so I figured I'd try again.

Necrum

A dank smell slowly made it's way towards the mudokons nose. He stood stock still, faced by a creature he had never seen in all his life. It was green and pale, with a long tongue. It was quite long and appeared to have two heads.
"Hello, look, I escaped, bet you never saw anything like me before? Yeh, I'm an industrialist, found this place just now, looks cool doesn't it. I think it's a temple, never heard of this place though and I can't read the information stones because they aren't written in industrialist type, you want a snack boy?"
The fleech lashed it's tongue onto a branch and pulled itself up onto the ledge with the mudokon.
"Hey little guy, come here then,"

- Short story, hopefully shows how industrialist mudokons have no idea about their ancient ties, I'll leave it up to you whether the mudokon dies or makes a new friend.
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Oh yeah, fair point. Maybe he was just tortured until he lost consciousness.

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