I liked that line, too
And I never said she was hot!
Aaaaaaaanyway,
Thanks for the feedback. 'Tis very encouraging.
EDIT: Like all chapters of this section, this has been rewritten and has either been reposted or will be in the near future. The re-written Part 7 begins here.
Mysterious letters, oh my!
Jim was created by me and is twelve kinds of awesome!
His fear of sligs from the RPG is being downplayed in the story since it made him so hard to use at times, and it sort of used to switch on and off whenever it was convenient. So he won't be mortally afraid of sligs and instead will be mildly afraid of everything.
Also, Javi is scary!
REPLY! Especially you! Yes, you!