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Chapter 4 - Meet Munch

Vykkers Labs - a sick science lab experimenting on creatures for profit, not really a surprise considering Vykkers are industrialists.
But profit is low, and now that the Vykkers have found the last Gabbit, profit should rise...

Meet Munch - the last Gabbit, tied to a bed and waiting to have his lungs pulled out, but next to him were cages, and in those cages, were depressed little beings named fuzzles. The Vykkers left and munch was alone with the fuzzles.

"Save us!"
munch turned round to see that there was no one else about, and the fuzzles were talking to him.
"Please save us!"
"huh?"
the fuzzles continued:
"Please save us and we'll save you!"
the fuzzle repeated.
"Save us and we'll save you!"
Munch looked confused.
"Use your head!"
Munch looked up to find a device implanted in his skull.
"Use your Head you idiot!"
Munch strained, and the device in his head buzzed with electricity, but he could not free the furry beings.
"Hurry up you wuss!"
Munch strained again, but it was no use.
"Hurry up!"
he tried again, but nothing happened.
"You can do it! You can do it!"
Munch tried harder than ever and an electric bolt charged into the cage and freed one of the fuzzles.
He strained again and another cage was open.
And another, then another, and then the last one was open, and the fuzzles were free. Then they returned the favour and freed Munch.

"We've got to get out of here!" just as Munch said that, a creature with a vertical mouth that was stitched shut entered the room, it was holding a fuzzlecage that wasn't empty and banging on the side of it. Munch and the othyer fuzzles hid against the wall. just as the creature noticed them, Munch shouted:
"Get 'im!"
The fuzzles launched themselves onto the creature and mauled it, Munch then freed the trapped fuzzle.
"lets go!" squeaked a fuzzle.
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by the way, i know this part is off Munch's oddysee, but believe me, the story will pan out in a totally different direction...