some prts of this story are really upsetting, great so far! keep up the brilliant work! i want more!! im really loving this story, just a quick thing, YOU KILLED BIG FACE! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO, that was really devostating cuz abe hadnt seen him in years, then he sees him and BANG, bullet right through him!
i think alfs death was one of the best too cuz of the way u talked about the three bullets in his head, that was really upsettind too lol!
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