Just to let you know, I finally put myself in gear and read more of the story - I stopped at Chapter 40. I suppose it was the fight between Anni and Nick, and the trial following, that motivated me to read on and on. I enjoyed your version a lot more compared to what I tried to come up with back then (hopefully, my writing is better now).
I particularly enjoyed the 'red wire' part, and also the trial as a whole. Oh, and the conversation between Kix and Expert. *bandwagon*
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