Seriously, the original version of your notes was good, but the censored version is awesome, bit like a war-time personal letter that contains sensitive information.
I can usually bring up the usual suspects (thesis paper) if I wanted to explain why haven't I read the last half dozen (or more?) pages, so I can't really give any feedback. But, to bump the "TD theme songs for characters/scenes" topic, I know a
song which pretty much fits Anni and her state after Nova was experimented on. Ignore the "lip-synched dog in space" part - concentrate more on the "losing best friend for an experiment's sake" concept. Fitting or not, opinions are welcome.