Congrats to Dri, well done. I never thought of using first person.
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Sorry about the lines, I was going to redraw it on plain paper but the deadline crept up on me.
Sorry about the lack of contrast, normally I use the scanner at the library but I had to use my one because the library was being refurbished, and mine aint half as good.
That thing at the back is the presentation screen, knocked out of transmission, so now just showing static.
Thanks for your time everybody, upon seeing the competition it's pretty clear I would have lost anyway.
EDIT: Hey, where did my entry go?