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04-01-2010, 10:44 AM
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-----OOC-----

Holy cannoli ! That was fast ! That's some very interesting plot developing here Can't wait to see more of it ! Well, time to write some myself

-----IC-----

As the last security systems around the factory were booting up, SU-01 was about to return into the main building in hope to talk with the boss to the condition that the paranoid CEO finally got out of his office, but he got interrupted by a window turning orange on his display. It was from the "MOVEMENTS DETECTORS MANAGEMENT" utility he had opened up before.

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WARNING
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Report from TRAIN_TRACK_PILLAR_24 : Detection of three entities at coordinates (30,22) 3 identified as Mudokon(s). Risk level estimated : Level 2 (possible breakout/terrorist infiltration attempt).

Set "STOCKYARD" area to level 2 alert ?
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"Another alert ? Like this is gonna help me getting "Mister Locked Door" out of his shelter...Permission denied ! It's a few miles away. I'll go check it out myself..."

He closed the windows and headed to the said pillar in hover mode. And so he went across the stockyards, going through a couple of red beams diffused by the guard towers. As he was approaching, he spotted the 3 mudokons standing in the middle of what seemed to be a little garden or something similar.

"Okay, they don't look like terrorists. Unloading ammo..." He switched back to walk-mode some meters away and approached with a "calm" stance.
"Hey ! What are you doing here ?" He stopped a few inches away from the garden's border, his guns pointed down.
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