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"Someone gotten 'is place clean yet? Smells like a sewer pipe in 'ere!" His sneering remark was aimed at the serving Mudokons, who ignored him. The sligs in front of and behind him cackled.
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Ah, legendary slig wit!
But no, this is awesome, really enjoyed it, and look forward to more! This has really got a lot going for it, mystery, intrigue, a protagonist with a secret
I loved how you described Sam; I think it's rather brave putting her a fanfic at all
but you did a brilliant job.
My only criticism is that no one could possibly walk with two broken ankles. Shuffle along on her knees, or crawl, maybe.
And 5000? Man, my longest chapter only made it to 4000
Anyway, I'm really looking forward to reading more! When's the next update?
(sorry.)