Patience is part of reading fanfiction! I once read a really awesome story online. Been waiting four years for that one to update...
(Please don't make us wait four years.)
Aaaaaaaanyway, this chapter was like a large group of campers!
Insofar as a large group of campers is... (wait for it...) in tents!!!
Geddit? In tents, intense, geddit?
My one criticism is that it's sometimes hard to work out who's saying what. Especially in this chapter and a few others. It can be confusing.
Man, I feel really hyper right now. Too much tea...