yes you were supposed to think that... it#s only i should have done it differently it was way too obvious! xD
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Sorry, but I'm completely lost. I can't remember the main chararcter's name, or his counterpart. If I could have a quick fill-in, that'd be nice as I'm generally too busy or too lazy to reread stuff. I do like the way it's written, but I've lost the plotline.
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ahahahahaha xD
sorry about that I know I'm not a very logic person I'm very chaotic in my brain actually xD
thank you! (and thanx to the others too!)
perhaps some others are lost too xD
here is a little summary of what happened so far...
part 1: Sabie, a Mudokon, awakes after an experiment
part 2 + 3: Sabie finds out that the Vykkers transferred him into the body of a Slig - from now on Sabie is refferred to as 02 and the Slig who is in Sabies body now is 01
part 4: 02 and 01 are on the verge of starting a fight as a random Slig guard appears and interferes - in the end the random Slig shoots 01 who falls unconscious
part 5: time jump: Ed, another Slig, shows 02 his new post he has to guard the whole area from above the main gate, Ed guards the part at the outside and 2 other Sligs (Tjired and Coffee) guard the part before the gate
part 6: 02 falls asleep and dreams about what happened at th time when 01 got shot but a strange female Mudokon appears in his dream
part 7: 02 wakes up - there is a blackout and the other Sligs panic because the Mudokons seem to be running around free (which is only what Ed says)
part 8: the 4 Sligs Tjired Coffee Ed and 02 search for an emergency power supply or what ever it#s called xD
But they soon get all seperated and in the end 02 starts following some noises - he thinks it's a Mudokon and wants to catch it to get a promotion - (02 assumes it's the only escappee because he knows that the cages for the mudokons wouldn#t open just because of a blackout...i actually forgot to mention that ^^] but as he searches for the escappee he hears creepy voices whispering to him etc...
in the end of the chapter Ed finds 02 and they continue the search together
part 9: Ed and 02 talk about the outside after 02 was remembering his previous life as a Native Mudokon
-they arrive in a small hall and manage to corner the escapee
-02 realizes that the escapee is Nat, one of his best friends as the lights suddenly go on again
part 10: 01 appears and knocks Ed out after Ed has fired a shot at Nat, who knocked 02 out, but the shot only grazed Nat.
-02 wakes up again he checks if Ed is still alive when suddenly the creepy voices talk to him and the strange female Mudokon appears again - but this time she's real or 02 still dreaming?
-Tjired is after 01 who injured him
part 11: 02 and 01 are talking, 01 plans to escape he also caused the breakdown from before etc... 02 is determined to prevent 01 from doing so Tjired appears and 01 wants to run away but 02 catches him and brings him back to ...
part 12: ...he brings him back to the hall with the mudokon cages and locks him in.
There are also Nat and White (02 friends) in the cage, they talk to 01 while 02 is listening - 02realizes that he and his friends are enemies now etc....
suddenly tjired appears he's suspicious about 02 and 01 strange behaviour
ugh i just realized how much of an experiment this story is if i ever write something again then i will do it differently for sure xD
hope you still enjoy...
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...don't ever call a Slig a “Xtrzzz” because it's one of the most insulting swearwords ever... no you can't even imagine it! A Slig would kill you right away if you would insult him like that 
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“What… what do you mean?”
“Who the fkrzz cares about that?”
-01 and I reply at the same time.
“I mean this, exactly this…” –his accent is barely understandable it’s almost the same as sliggish- “It’s not normal… you two are not normal. Are you spies sent by the Natives?! Perhaps you just possessed him!” Tjired looks at 01 sharply and then at me. “Xtrzzz!”
“Don’t say that… EVER again or I’ll kill you with these hands.” 01 glowers at Tjired clenching one of his fists threatingly.
“Maybe he’s long dead and just controlled by your freakish tribal powers! Maybe you control more than one!” Tjireds voice suddenly rises and he turns around towards the shadows at the far end of the hall where the abandoned cages are.
We stand in silence for a moment staring motionless at the shadowy place.
That’s right the feeling of being watched was not caused by Tjired at all, now when I stare into the shadows a strange creepy feeling overcomes me even though no one is visible.
From the corner of my eye I see 01 shocked expression. He looks so deeply scared that I wonder if he experienced more than me.
02 you should kill him!
A strong feeling of nausea rises in me the same moment and my vision blurs while it starts echoing in my brain again >>01-E01415M778 –Failed.<<
>>01-E01415M778 –Failed…<< My strength is leaving my body.
I feel like a dry leaf in the wind. >>01-E01415M778 –Failed.<<
>>01-E01415M778 –Failed!!<< The voice in my head quickens along with my heartbeat.
>>01-E01415M778 –Failed!!!<<
>>01-E01415M778 –Failed!!!<<
>>01-E01415M778 –Failed!!!<<
>>01-E01415M778 –Failed!!!<<
>>01-E01415M778 –Failed!!!<<
“GYAAAAHH STOOOP!!!” –kill it! Kill it before it swallows you up!
>>01-E01415M778 –FAILED!<<
I fall to my knees clutching my head screaming. While Tjired backs off in terror aiming at me with his gun immediately.
“NO! STOP!!” I see 01 standing halfway up and stretching his hand out between the cage bars holding his uninjured arm in front of my head trying to protect me.
Tjired screams something I don’t understand to which 01 replies in sliggish.
Their talk goes on for a few seconds, words flutter through the air that I never heard before, sounds of which I can’t grasp the meaning, they argue. Becoming more urgend 01 is getting frustrated and quiets down while Tjired yells like mad. I hear desperation rising in both of their voices and suddenly it’s quiet.
The voice in my head stopped talking too and I’m able to finally relax.
With a quick glance at Tjired Nat slowly approaches and leans his head against the cage bars. He looks at me calmly, ignoring the tense atmosphere completely even though he fears Tjired so much.
I stare at his face. Has he figured it out?
Tjired still aims at me his hand is shaking violently. I hear 01 cursing under is breath.
He exchanges a short glance with Nat and suddenly says a Sliggish word, which we Sligs use to open the voice locks. Normally Mudokons are not able to pronounce it.
The next second Nat sprints out and grabs my arm pulling me to my feet, dragging me away as fast as he can, while 01 storms out in front of us.
I cringe at the shot that is fired. But luckily it missed - 01 dodged it and lungs forward. For a second it seems he wants to attack Tjired but he only pushes him aside running away.
No not running away.
My eyes widen as I see that he’s running towards the abandoned cages. I tear away from Nat screaming at him to stop.
But it’s too late.
Sabie help!
No 02 you need to kill, kill them all!
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to be continued?
explaination why I can't update the next chapter so soon :
i've chosen arts and physics to be my 4. and 5.main subjects on my own free will 2 years ago 
...well two years ago the world was different... i thought these subjects were more fun.... i thought i was more intelligent than lazy back then... but it turns out to be vice versa...