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02-20-2010, 03:33 AM
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thank you all!!! and sorry i realised that i have been quite annoying ^^;...


...well anyways the holidays are over i haven't really learnt as much as I wanted and time passed too fast... way too fast.. bah and I still have art block!!! xD but I'm in a really good mood and wrote the next chapter 8D


so i decided to return to the interet and update this thread


if only my art block had been gone I would have made a comic out of this chapter! (yeah I'm heavily influenced by Gintama right now haha it's really funny :'D


back to the topic! EDIT: (I'm currently writing chapter 13 and all I can say is that I'm pleased that i finally reached the point where something important will be revealed... well almost revealed but it's enough to prove that some of your theories wrong theehee)

enjoy if you want




(…11…)





“You hesitate?” –His scornful voice – my voice - echoes through the corridor pervaded by a slight breeze of fresh air. “You are an idiot 02…”

While my feet march forward quicker and quicker I pull out my gun.

“Why don’t you come with me… staying here is nothing but waiting for the death.”

“Aren’t you dead?” I ask him concentrating on the movements of his shadow on the grey concrete wall .

“Do you think I willingly die in this body of a shkr Mud in this frkizzing place full of your kind and full of Vykkers?!” I see his shadow folding his arms and leaning against the wall. He intentionally stands behind the corner so that I can’t see him directly. What is he planning?

“You have caused the blackout to escape.”

“Of course I did, unlike you I still have the guts to at least try something.”

“I will not let you leave!” Slowly I approach the corner and lean against the wall.

“You still think they will change everything back the way it was? –But what do I expect from a stupid mud anyway?” -He suddenly steps out into the light from behind the corner glaring at me for a second.

But then his expression changes and he starts sprinting in my direction. –I almost forgot how fast I was able to run…- Surprised about his sudden action I forget to stop him and he passes me.

But I run after him and eventually manage to grab his arm firmly. He wants to free himself but freezes as we hear Tjired behind us.

“Let go of me, before this idiot sees me.” 01 murmurs, glancing to the corner.

“No!” I whisper back.

Furiously 01 stares at me but I start walking away hastily dragging him after me.

“Stop that! I can walk on my own! Where are you going?!”

“Shut up.” Not looking back, I drag him to a smaller corridor to the side that only Scrubs use as a shortcut, it’s one of the older corridors.

The ceiling is not as high and the corridor is much narrower as usual. There are no doors here at all and the air smells as if we are the first ones that were here since at least 50 years.

Since there are no lamps the light gets fainter soon until it is almost completely dark. Without my mask I would have trouble to see something.

“Cut it out! I don’t obey your fkrzzin orders! –Mud!” 01 yells trying to free himself.

“Shut up!”

“I’m still a Slig and I won’t let me boss around by-”

“You are mad that’s what you are! –Look what you have done!” I turn around and glance at Tjired, only seeing the two red lights of his visor in the darkness. “He’s following us!”

“So what?! I don’t give a-”

“-Of course not!”

“Don’t you get it you idiot?!” 01 lowers his voice his eyes narrowing with anger. “We switched bodies! You can say goodbye to your old self!”

“If we do what they want they will return us again. And then I would like to still have all of my limbs!!” I exclaim loudly realizing suddenly that we arrived.

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wow once it#s updated this chapter looks so tiny haha xD

next chapter will be up tomorrow if i get at least 1 reply and if i manage to write down chapter 13 before uhm... tomorrow? x3
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